After completing the new draft for Chapter Three last week it has been a very productive 7 days for Chapter Four this week.
In fact I can report I have completed half of Chapter Four already, it helped not having to change an awful lot of the story but some significant alterations were required.
After Max's training group's successful running of the preview performance in the Palace Theatre, the next day it is back to business and back in training for the final Tour training day.
Apart from Max having to scrape through to pass that major element of training, he encounters a mysterious event in the Greenroom Cafeteria that catches his imagination.
Enlisting his closest colleagues they decide to go the the manager of the Cafeteria to try and squeeze the details out of him.
It is in this Chapter that we begin to see the true horror of our villain and the measures he goes to in order to silence those who challenge him.
In an extraordinary training session, Max manages to persuade the tour trainer Mary into divulging the truth about the Garden Palace Devil.
It soon becomes clear to Max that the Devil is not the real villain in the building.
Chapter Four also marks the turning point in the book where we leave off the introduction of the building and the characters and the intrigue and set forth on the journey that this has set up.
After being very disinterested in the lame Garden Palace ghost story Max is forced to learn for the tour, he is extremely interested in the legend of the Garden Palace Devil, for the story not only seems interesting and intriguing to Max, he begins to understand the Devil is still within the Garden Palace walls.
Stay tuned.
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